The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonerfully written. I lost my grandpa when I was 8 and it was so confusing. Thanks for sharing your feelings.
08/04/07
What a lovely thought, and a perfect title.

A few words threw me for a bit, but all in all I read this with increasing joy--just a wonderful, wonderful sweet poem.
08/05/07
Beautiful thoughts in this poem.
Nice job on this poem. This is a powerful and beautiful line:
With heavy heart, my tears long wept,
Your sacrifice, did he accept?

A great motivator for us to witness to our loved ones now.