The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/07
A neat telling of a familiar bible story. Enjoyed your "take" on it. Some of the dialogue was a bit confusing, but it may have been me. Keep writing!
Some great phrasing, like: "belittled by the perils of life" - "She lost her livestock to hungry prophets and her personality to the hurdles of fate. " I got a bit confused as to who was speaking in the middle, and a careful read over for typo's and such would benefit you. But I loved your story behind “the woman with the issue of blood”. Keep writing - I see a gift here. :)