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Topic: Write in the ADVENTURE genre (05/24/07)
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TITLE: VICTORY | Previous Challenge Entry
By Lisa Vernon
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You thought you had me but the devil is a liar
How can one be so wicked and expect to escape the fire
Too many games that people play-harboring a heart full of lies
Creating disaster only for themselves bound by dark soul ties
Oh so hungry -captured by temptation that you couldn't resist
lets not be his search agent preying on helpless victims to add to his list
Don't get stuck owing him your soul,walking in his plan
Living under the curse of the law struck down by God's mighty Hand
So let's ask ourselves - Is it really worth it? Divination,Witchcraft, greed backbiting for riches
storing up on earth someone elses God given treasures
Only to be left behind lost in the dust after the Second Coming
Paying the cost for temporary pleasures
We need to thank God for Jesus and run to the cross
For He has come not for the righteous but to save the lost at all cost
Let's open up and recieve Him today because on tommorrow there is no guarantee
God sent His only begotten Son to this earth to die for you and to die for me
Thank you Jesus for the VICTORY at the Cross and for saving us from the fire
You took the blinders off of our eyes for us to see that the devil is a liar
You thought you had us satan but the battle is already won
For we belong to God Almihgty who sent to us His only Son
His one brave and obedient act supercedes any adventure man could ever desire
You may gain small victories here on earth but the ultimate cost is eternal fire!
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This poem will flow better with a bit more work on the rhythm--a pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables.
Thanks for sharing your Christian adventure!