The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
Good dialog and great use of it--using it to tell your story!
05/18/07
Very interesting story with good dialogue! The ending was a surprise with Marissa willing to go live the rest of her life in the past as a Jewish bride with Dan! Good job! :)
The writing here is very good, but I don't quite understand the changes in the plot. It needs a little more explanation. The structure of the writing itself is very smoothe.