The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good science fiction. It's a shame there's not more space to let it flow and really tell the tale in it's fullness.
Great Sci-Fi. Well written. Good discriptions.
05/20/07
I think this would make an excellant novella/novel. I was kinda dissapointed...cuz I wanted more! But there's the word limit, I know. Bother. Anyway, if you keep up the good work, you'll be in intermediate in no time.
05/21/07
Good descriptions and dialog!
05/21/07
Excellent description. I could picture everything so clearly.
05/23/07
Your gift for writing shines! Great entry!
Excellent characterizations!
05/24/07
I like any story with a bagel and a cup of coffee. Great job. God bless.