The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a good poem. The meter seems a little off, but I like the last verse and how it ties it all together.
04/28/07
Sweet and heartwarming. Very simple, but its message is satisfying and complete. Nice job.
Lovely poem. To me it really shows the circle of things when we are in God's hand. Nicely done.