The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/07
I loved this! It read like a psalm of praise. I loved the irregular rhythm; it contributed to the realism of the narrator's expression of praise. Very nicely done
From your heart to ours - like David - vulnerable and ever upward to God. Thanks! Loved it.
This in a wounderful poem,
I enjoyed it very much.Keep up the good writing in his name.
I love the imagery here. The very first verse was my favorite and your title fits just right. Great job! ^_^
03/22/07
This reads like it belongs in Psalms. Just lovely!