The Official Writing Challenge
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Your POV is clever and you wove a convincing tale. You could improve the readability of your piece with a little more editing. Keep up the good work.
This is a new twist to an age-old story. Good job.
02/05/07
This was an interesting way to see this subject. I liked it and enjoyed the read. Very nice work