The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/07
Being guarded and quite reserved, there are few things that I'll let take a smile from me; they must be earned and earnest. Not that I'm anything, but I know what touches me and when. This story did just that and my day is brighter for it.
I loved the humour in this story. What a good way to get the message across! Keep writing.
02/02/07
Great story! You really capture this little boy and his grandfather. I like their voices, and I like the lesson you convey so simply.
Hi Sarah, congratulations for your winning.I am really happy for you, especially the way you write, it's so inspiring, indeed you deserved the award.Glory be to God, Justus