The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/07
This was a very sweet character study, and you did a great job at establishing how difficult it was for dad to write, making his letters to mom that much more meaningful.

This would be a natural to expand.

The last sentence could possibly be left off; you've already "preached it" by your picture of your dad.

I enjoyed this a great deal.
01/19/07
This reminded me of when I was in college and my dad wrote a card to me, only once, and wrote that he loved me. I treasured it and he is now gone. Thanks for the great memory.
01/19/07
Very good! A point well made - a point well taken.

Like I said, VERY GOOD!