The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/07
Very well written! And from one novice turkey roster to another, I have to ask...Isnt't it great to cook the first turkey? We did ours this Christmas!
01/15/07
I really enjoyed reading your "turkey story"! I've never heard of adding cloves when roasting a turkey, but then I've never cooked one myself, so what do I know?! :)

However, one suggestion I have is to break up your narrative with paragraphs for easier reading.

Thanks for sharing your interesting narrative! You managed to make me hungry in the process! :)
01/16/07
A very nice story. I also want to suggest breaking it up into paragraphs. You kept my interest and made me wonder what cloves might do to a turkey. Nice work!