The Official Writing Challenge
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This was very nicely written and brings out a good point for the ending. Keep up the good work.
01/12/07
As a surrendering Martha, you pegged her to-do list well, and Mary's heart even better. Nice work!
01/16/07
I enjoyed reading your story, as I tend to be a "Martha" sometimes myself, when it would be better to be a "Mary"! I think there is a season to everytbing, as Ecclesiastes says--seasons to be Martha and seasons to be Mary. In your story, I'm glad Martha came to the realization that there are different ways of serving others, and we all have different gifts. Thank you for a thought-provoking piece! :)
01/16/07
Nicely done and the last line was excellent. I am a Martha, too and I can so relate to her. You painted her character very well. Good job!