The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/07
A wonderful lesson - and I like how you tied your experience in with it. A bit of punctuation editing would help, but this was well done!
01/15/07
I agree. This was cute and well-written. The lesson was delivered without being too preachy. Well done!
01/16/07
I, too, enjoyed your story and appreciated your message! I especially liked how you described the Bible as the Book that tells us "how to live, how to love, where to go, what to do." Thank you for sharing! :)