The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/06
Rich with truth and metaphor - well done. Perhaps a blank line between paragraphs?
12/10/06
Very good parable. I could really relate to this example and enjoy the words of this story. Nice work.
Great job with the topic! I loved how the 23rd Psalm was woven into the duties of the Shepherd. I truly enjoyed reading this.