The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/06
Millie is certainly an inspiration and a role model for all of us! What a wonderful story!

There were a few "mechanical" problems with punctuation, etc., but with a little proofreading, they could be easily taken care of.

I enjoyed reading this piece and thank you for sharing it! :)
12/03/06
Such a heart-warming story. I loved it.
12/05/06
Great story! Good dialogue and action and a good heart pull at the end! Keep writing - I can see you have much talent.