The Official Writing Challenge
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11/18/06
A very nice testimony and I liked the double meaning. You kept it going through the whole story. Nice work.
11/18/06
You have some wonderful stanzas here - great imagery. Keep writing!
11/19/06
Lots of good images, and a very consistent rhyme scheme.

The meter's a little bit "off" in a few places, but that would be easy to fix.

Reminds me of the old hymn "Love Lifted Me"--one of my favorites!