The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/06
Amen! What an excellent story. One suggestion would be to place spaces between the paragraphs, but I loved reading this just as it is.
Good work!
Wow-this was a great story. Very realistic, it drew me in and held my attention.
Just a tip-try adding some spaces next time to make it easier to read.