The Official Writing Challenge
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10/13/06
A very interesting approach to the topic! I enjoyed reading through your day, and your preparation for this musical devotion to the Lord. The end was definitely an eye-opener to me - never quite thought about that!! I would suggest you watch your punctuation and grammar - but otherwise, this was a great read!
10/13/06
I enjoyed this a lot. One suggestion is to work on keeping your tense consistent--not switiching back and forth from present to past. Unique approach to the topice, and well done.
10/13/06
Yikes, I meant "topic."
10/15/06
An interesting and thought-provoking piece. How sad that this warrior for God doesn't take the time for herself. A lesson to us all; if we are a servant, we sometimes need to take time for ourselves