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TITLE: A Walk in The Garden | Previous Challenge Entry
By DeWayne Bricker
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Earth and Heaven
All complete
Only God could accomplish
Such a feat
On day seven
God finished His toil
And He rested from making
The water and soil
He called it holy
And that day He blessed
Not for work
A day of rest
This is the story
Of heaven and earth
How god spoke it all
And gave it birth
No green had sprouted
No tree yet found
For God had not yet
Commanded the ground
There was no rain
No man to till
No one to set
Above the hill
Then went up
A watery spray
That covered the hills
And wet the clay
From the dust
Arose the man
Life was given
By God’s own hand
Yahweh breathed life
And designed mans roll
Into his nostrils
A living soul
A Garden he planted
In Eden to east
And placed man there
To rule the beast
Of all the garden
From every tree
Food for you
A gift from Me
But of good and evil
You shall not eat
For on that day
Death you’ll meet
It is not well
Alone man to be
I’ll make a helper
Her name is she
From out the ground
All creatures He made
Man named them all
With him they stayed
He named them all
Each name took
And they were written
Within the Book
But for man
No helper was found
So God let him sleep
Upon the ground
From man’s rib
A woman was birth
And she became
The mother of earth
Flesh of my flesh
Bone of my bone
Now I’ll never
Strive alone
Because of this day
His parents he’ll leave
And unto his wife
Forever will cleave
They both were naked
Yet had no shame
They did not know
Evil’s first name
Since the moment when man learned evils first name he has had a hole in his heart. A hole he has tried to fill with everything imaginable; a hole that cannot be filled except with that close walk with God in the cool of the garden.
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Nice rhythm, and a nice read.
A watery spray/That covered the hills/And wet the clay. First line of stanza 17 is a bit of a problem. Otherwise, well done in this clear portrayal of creation.