The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/06
Nice devotional. It might make the intro more captivating to do it in present tense then flash forward. The rest seemed to flow like a stream of consciousness without a lot of structure or a wrap up at the end. But I liked your thoughts and how you mentioned the verses and attributes of God that have helped you depend on Him. Thanks for sharing!
08/27/06
You have a wonderful testimony of God's faithfulness here! I like how you set the stage at the beginning, then showed us how God got you through. I must admit, however, that your sentence about spelling test day kind of threw me for a loop. I was waiting to hear how this particular issue resolved throughout the piece, and it distracted me from the rest. Great message for all of us - keep writing!
08/31/06
It takes courage to share a testimony like yours. God has blessed you with the gift of a good writer. Keep it up!