The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
This is powerful--I like it! Tighten it up a bit, and it will find a readership.
Nice. I can hear the heartache, and see the imagry you evoke with your words. A little more work and watch common misspelled words - loose should be lose - and you'll be on your way to seeing yourself going up a level.