The Official Writing Challenge
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08/13/06
YOu made some really good points here, although I found the Martin Luther King analogy a bit distracting, because I think it falls down on a number of points. You would present your writing to better advantage with lots more white space - between each paragraph, which should be no more than 10 lines long. THank you for sharing your passion.