The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/06
I LOVE the last two stanzas of this! What a neat, encouraging message! I must say, though, that the beginning of the poem didn't flow for me - just my opinion, and I wouldn't call myself a poet. I did enjoy the message, though - thanks for writing!
A little choppy here and there-but very moving in the message. Keep it up!