The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/06
What a sad - and true - commentary on the world. Some of your imagery and language is just amazing. I TRULY enjoyed this!
Good Job. Thank you.
08/02/06
"One pearl preserved from the past was the practice of persistence." I liked this line especially. Great writing.
08/02/06
This one definitely needs some spacing, paragraph rearrangement and then It could be called a Real Great Read. Thanks for sharing.