The Official Writing Challenge
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Sounds like a heart budding with gratitude. Only one suggestion-"for excepting me" for accepting me. The former means to exclude, leave out! just the opposite of what you are trying to convey!!
07/17/06
This is very Psalm-like and tender. With more metric consistency, it could be set to music as a lovely praise song.
07/19/06
Very nice job. I found myself singing it before I was done.