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Excellent meditation, very well-crafted and solid! Some powerful points here. I like this: ”We numb ourselves from the dreams God gives to those who earnestly seek him.” (Thanks, I needed that!)

Just one little nitpick: the "Heavens to Betsy!" didn't feel quite consistent with the article’s voice. The preceding paragraph was a nice buildup; perhaps there's an exclamation that fits the exhortive tone a bit better.

Your ending was excellent, full of layered meanings:
“And we’ve got to turn down the noise.” I always love a truly well-pondered meditation. Great stuff!