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TITLE: Henry, The Snail | Previous Challenge Entry
By D Stroup
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“Oh! Ah! Ow! Ouch! Hot! Hot!” thought Henry. “This sidewalk is almost too hot to cross. I knew I should have crossed earlier this morning when it was cooler, but those big new luscious plant leaves in the flower bed were too good to leave.”
“Those leaves were good, but now I want something better. I’ve always dreamed of getting into the garden, but I know I can’t do it myself. It’s so far away. I would love to dine on juicy squash leaves, or pole bean leaves, or maybe even some mint to freshen my breath. There has to be something better than just the foliage plants around this common, ordinary yard. Maybe if I try harder, I can make it into the garden this time.”
Looking up and admiring the fluttering butterflies, Henry thought, “Sure wish I had those big wings that the butterflies have. Then I could just sail through the air right across this old hot sidewalk into that beautiful garden over there.”
As Henry plodded along, he heaved a sigh and thought, “You have to have a lot of patience to be a snail, ’cause you can’t get anywhere very fast. Compared to me, Elmer, the tortoise, is fast, and he is the slowest thing in the whole yard.”
“Uh oh! Why is it getting dark all of a sudden? Oh no! It’s the shadow of the gardener. He’s coming. I’ve gotta hurry. He’ll probably squash me just like all those other big people who love to squash anything that crawls. It’s not safe around this yard. If I could just get under those big leaves next to the sidewalk, he won’t be able to see me. Then maybe I can sneak into his garden.”
“What? What is he doing? Why, he is picking me up and putting me right in the middle of his garden on a big juicy looking leaf. I don’t understand. Why is he being so good to me? All I ever do is destroy his good work, his plants. How could he care about me? I’m just a creepy, crawly worm. Why is he giving me what I always dreamed of, a place in his garden?”
“This is outstanding. I won’t ever have to leave, because I have everything I ever wanted right here in the garden. It’s better than I ever imagined. Thank you…”
“…, put your hope in the LORD; For with the LORD there is mercy, and with Him is abundant redemption.” Psalm 130:7 (NKJV)
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One little thing...in the 3rd last para. did you mean to say he was a creepy, crawly worm? I thought Henry was a snail?
Anyhow, I loved this story.
Blessings,
Trina
Trina<><
"maybe even some mint to freshen my breath." Very cleverly done; I hope you can get published for children soon!