The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/06
That was a cute story and something very typical that a kid would do. I liked your story, you kept me reading to the end. MsHollybear
06/19/06
A bun dance? How cute is that? Loved it. Where is Emily? I need to pinch her cheeks! Well done!
06/20/06
I enjoyed this take on the word "abundance". Delightful and thoroughly likely tale!
This was a great story. Your dialogue was good, but try to get away from using the tags. He asked, she said, he answered. Let your characters actions speak instead of the tag. Other than that it was awesome.