The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/06
This is a good story, with a beautiful message. Watch your punctuation so your sentences don't run together. Overall, good entry. Keep at it!
06/09/06
Realistic in your emotions. Good job. One small spelling mistake - put instead of pit, unfortunately its one of those that spell check won't catch.

Joyce