The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/06
What a beautifully passionate prayer! Thank you for sharing! :)
06/12/06
Strong words here - I like this. Watch the few grammatical errors (last line s/b peace is ...; and lead s/b led). Sounds as if you are speaking from your heart. Keep writing - this is good.
06/12/06
Reads like a Psalm. Thanks.