The Official Writing Challenge
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A couple of thoughts: It would help to divide your essay into paragraphs, one for each thought.

You might be able to grab the reader's heart more if you explained what happened with you in the last year, before you came back to Him. You don't have to lay out all the nitty gritty details, but a little more would help. Then you could draw a contrast between where you were (when at your lowest point) and where you are now.

Plus, you could then bring that in with something like "I don't know where I'm going, but I do know where I was and where I am."

The ending is very strong--I'm still here. Good statement, with lots of possibilities as to where you might go from here.

May God guide you as you take it step-by-step with Him.