The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/06
Beautiful poem - I loved it!
06/02/06
A long poem, but the progression of thought was easy to follow. Good message. Well done.
I really like it! Easy flow, good thought progression, and very inspirational. I think you nailed your audience down pretty well. I also appreciate how very close you came to perfect meter without straining the word order or grammar. Would you like to tighten this all the way? I may be able to help; feel free to PM me. Nice work!
Wonderful. Keep sharing.
06/04/06
Very nicely done! I liked how you worked in several scripture references. It was also quite convicting for me. Well done.