The Official Writing Challenge
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05/13/06
I love the picture you paint of the rainbow, and the sign it is of hope. The first half didn't seem to connect so well with the rainbow motif, and I'd have liked you to have expanded the second half more, and shrunk the first half. Some real potential here.
05/13/06
I like the rainbow metaphor. Very visual! I would have liked this to be longer so that you could have expanded your thoughts a bit and really brought a common theme through it all. Keep it up! This was nice!