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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Hope (05/04/06)
REACHING THERE
People wants to reach there by just knowing that it is available to go there.They just want rewards not knowing of the hard work and dedication that's involved.In this administeration people live as they are still in bondage.When Christ died for us and rose a new live had began,a live of freedom and abundance which became availabe through christ.It is a pleasure to know that we could live ia hope of the said return of jesus christ.Isn't thar amasing in this world of misery,fear,anger,murder,war,and no peace,there is hope.
The bible states If i go to prepare a place for you i will come again,it also states that God don't lie.We are sure thar promise of christ appearance is nay.It is the only hope we can surely hold God at,christ promise.So as we await,continue in the word of god,for in this world there is no hope so promising and sure.live in the agape love which God has shown us through christ,remember a father always keeps his promise.When you seek solutions in live,think of that sweet,everlasting,hope.
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Member Comments
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Helen Paynter
05/13/06
Great Bilical truths in this, thank you.
Brandi Roberts
05/14/06
I see a great piece in the works here. Put a space between each sentence and watch your spelling. You definitely have the beginnings of a good piece.
Dr. Sharon Schuetz
05/14/06
This is a good message. Watch your punctuation and spelling. With a little work you could make this into a nice piece.
Val Clark
05/18/06
I can only echo what the others have said and add: You have the beginnings of a good article here. Spread your thoughts out. Make each new one into a paragraph of its own and read it aloud to make sure that it makes sense. Arrange each paragraph so that it builds on the one you have just written. Add short stories or anecdotes to illustrate/clarify your major points. Keep writing!