The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a good message. I can feel the pain of the author who loves his or her child. I too am a mother of a child, grown now, who had social problems. Never give up hope.
05/13/06
I think I can guess who this is...
Good poem. You communicate your pain and love really well.
Have a little look at your meter - reading it aloud is the best way.
Thank you for being vulnerable.
05/14/06
A beautiful yet sad wording of your son's trials, as well as your own. The feelings were raw and pain felt in every line. Well done. I will keep you in prayer..
You captured the torment and frustration beautifully.
05/17/06
Oh, how hard it must have been to put these thoughts onto paper and then the added discipline of a rhyming poem! You bared your soul and communicated so much of your journey without melodrama or sentimentality - a rare gift.
This poem took courage and grace to write. I felt and understand your frustration and pain at watching a loved one suffer.