The Official Writing Challenge
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Well thought out and creative entry! I love the interesting approach to the topic. Two suggestions- Put a little space between paragraphs to make the reading easier(double space)and try to weave the topic in throughout the piece rather than at the end. Your creativity is brilliant! Keep working on the mechanics. Very nice entry!
Hhhmmnnn, it's truly interesting how you "get into the mind of the character". Gives one a different perspective of how a man might have thought. Thanks for giving "him" expression through your imagination.
A very creative piece. Getting into the mind of the character as you did allowed me to pay closer attention to what I missed in the reading of this biblical episode.
I like your 1st person approach, it really makes your character come alive. Since he had a complicated story of political intrigue to tell, perhaps you could have used all of your alloted words, and explained it in more detail for those unfamiliar with the events. And definitely in separate paragraphs, to help your reader organize the events. Good job at giving him a voice, and helping us to see his side of the story!