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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Fulfillment (04/06/06)
9 April 1986 ,the sun has just began to rise when little Robert Jesse woke up, went straight to the wall just to confirm it for the last time as if he was not sure. Yes it’s today, I am twelve already he said to himself ;I will celebrate with everyone, running out of his room to share with his family, reaching the staircase he realised that nobody would be at home. Father has gone to work and his two his sisters are in higher college . He sat down on the sofa wishing himself the best he could imagine. He tried to remember the last time he was with his family which was nine years ago when mother was still alive, she is full of live and love for everyone especially for Robert, always wanting to give a helping hand. She works with a non governmental organization called 'Home for the homeless' she died while trying to save the live of a life of a little girl who ran out of sanity and jumped over the wall into the road and Mrs Jesse went after her and was knocked by an oncoming vehicle. A drop touched his palm and he became conscious of himself; it's my birthday he said to trying to erase the thought in his mind now pacing the wide sitting room, no friends, no close company and in his thought he realised the eyes of Reverend Don through the window who was being taken hands cuffed to the police station for having information about the alleged man said to have killed the parent of a two years old boy who he left alone in the house after gunshotting his parent for not complying to his fraud business. The rouge who later went for confession asking for forgiveness and putting the burden on Revrend Don who confirm to the knowlegde of the selfsame person but cannot disclose identity due to the calling of God. when Robby reached the front of the Cathedral staring helplessly at Rev. Don, his mother's death flashed his mind."Do i have to die before i can show my love and care to the world" he murmured; But the words were to the deaf ears of the air. Another drop came down from his eyes and he said "Who can fulfil this calling.
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Edy T Johnson
04/14/06
With just these few words you put us in touch with a much bigger story, crying to be told. You have the heart of a storyteller, for sure. I hope you keep on sharing your talent!