The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/06
Ah, very close to an e.e. cummings style, deep and interptative meanings. I really liked this, the open verse, the emotion compounded and demonstrated by NOT breaking into stanzas. Well done, deserves mention.
04/18/06
A great poetic way of rewriting the wisdom of Solomon...VERY well done; however, broken down into shorter stanza's would have made a more powerful Punch...as each stanza would have come alive with each new gem of wisdom! Definitely a piece of art - by a brilliant Wordsmith!