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Never let anyone tell you how to be, you are perfect just the way God made you and look at the things he has been doing in your life. The verse from Jeremiah is a great one for you: "I alone know the plans I have for you, plans to bring you prosperity and not disaster, plans to bring about the future you hope for." (Jeremiah 29:11) Great going on your writing.
Here's just one thing to work on, and it's a very easy fix. Put spaces AFTER punctuation, not before. Like this:
I like apples, bananas, and oranges. I'm a fruity person.
Instead of like this:
I like apples ,bananas ,and oranges .I'm a fruity person .
Keep up the good work!