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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Enter (02/27/06)
The Invitation

“Enter into MY rest”, He said.
You will find perfect peace of mind.
A weary soul can find sweet relief, if he will only come.

Unto the Lord, all may abide
His yoke take up and your heavy burdens…
gladly lay them down.

Enter into the new, abundant, glorious life,
that is found only in Christ.
Forever gone away is the old,
the new you can now take hold.

The Saviour stands at the door,
a gentle invitation in hand.
With outstretched hands He beckons
Waiting, calling, bidding for you and me to come.

Enter in through the narrow gate,
To the joy the Lord has prepared for us
A banquet, a feast, a wedding there.
Come in the table is spread!

Even before time began, He knew your very name.
Love and joy wait there for you.
Follow His lead, He is the way.

Enter in…He says to come!
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esther robinson
03/07/06
Good writing. Try to make it rythmic next time.
Daniele Moskal
03/08/06
This is a very good poem with good use of descriptive words. I disagree with Esther's comments that it should be rythmic. First-of-all it's a writers perogative to choose how they want their potential masterpiece to look and sound like!!

Well done and thanks for sharing. God bless ya!
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