The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/06
Awww...that is really beautifully written. Good flow and rhythem, delicate words. Very touching! A winning poem to me. God bless ya, littlelight
02/21/06
"Lord help us to live as this poem suggests."
Very nice. Thank you.
02/23/06
A great message throughout; however, poetically speaking, the rhythm is off a bit, diminishing the smooth flow. Thank you for sharing such beautiful thoughts.
02/23/06
Lovely thoughts. A few grammar and punctuation errors (words of encouragement that help another's burden be light), but all in all very well written.