The Official Writing Challenge
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My compliments to the Divine "chef" who puts everything back together, and to you for a job well done.
Your words touched me deeply as I could vividly recall my own moments of nearing my breaking point. God bless your amazing daughter for being a shining Light in your time of need. Thank you for this beautiful story.
This is wonderful. Awesome job!
Encouraging to hear we all have points in our lives we feel we are breaking. Thank you for sharing.
Very real -good job!
Congratulations! A well-deserved first place! This piece touched my heart and brought tears to my eyes. God bless you!
Bravo! Bravo! Tender and touching. Just lovely. Thank you.
Great writing.
I loved the ending, really touching.Welldone.
You've moved me to tears with this wonderful piece. The daughter in this piece sounds so much like my youngest daughter. You've really captured a precious experience here. Great writing!
This is a great work.I have two feelings about this write up.[1]I felt my self crying with the author[2]I feel i dont know how to write at all, threatened...
The attention to details,the emotions evoked, the clearity an vividness leaves me breathless...keep it up
no small wonder that you won first place.this article made me want to read more. you are very talented.keep writing.