The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/06
Cute ending—a modern twist to an old story. Just goes to show that people don't change no matter how many thousands of years have past. The end seemed a bit rushed, but as a whole, good job.
02/09/06
The dialog here seemed a bit anachronistic...but your ending was a nice little kicker. Good job!
02/10/06
Yes, this was an interesting veiw. Make a neat skit I think too. The ending took the cake! God bless ya, littlelight