The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/06
Oh yes. Been there, done that. Loss of control can happen that quickly and for exactly those reasons. Watch word choices- e.g.instant, instance.
02/09/06
I love your title, and the lesson therein! Be careful of quite / quiet, and using each/their in the same phrase. This object lesson would be a great sermon illustration.
02/10/06
Very discriptive peice, felt like I was going under. Thank you for sharing! God bless ya, littlelight