The Official Writing Challenge
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Well, the title got my attention! A space between the paragraph's might make it easier to read on the eyes. I wonder if we could have gotten more into Mr. Hooker's heart if the story was told from his eyes? Just a thought! I enjoyed reading this and it made me think of all the young men who go overseas with no one to miss them...
02/21/05
Really nicely written. The end was a little OTT - it would have been more realistic to have him simply ask for prayer, but I loved this.
Very well done, Stanley. This story was among my favorites. Watch that word count and please keep entering. You're really good!