The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/06
Cute. I especially love this line: "And when one of those shiny stars fall from the sky, He didn’t drop it, He was just saying hello to you in a glorious kind of way."
Keep it up.
02/02/06
My first reaction was a bit startled that our Father in Heaven, The Almighty God was being called "Space Daddy"; but my reservations faded into mere discomfort for being from an older, stuffier and much less hip generation! It was truly a GREAT write, and believe it or not, I LOVED it! So true, so modern, and so awesomely written! Yes, my friend! God is exactly as you say...Neat! Keen! Cool! and we are all blessed by His wonderful creations! Right On - and Thank you for sharing!
02/03/06
I really liked this. Light, airy, and just simply delightfully written. I really didn't know what to expect seeing SPACE DADDY. I thought maybe a sci-fi type story. The way you wrote was simple, a child could understand and it fit right in with your title. Thank you for sharing! littlelight