The Official Writing Challenge
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Yes, those spaces aren't empty, are they? Well done. Vary your sentence lengths a bit more to break up the sameness - there is almost a beat to what you have written in some parts that I think would be good to work on. But, good job.
Gini, I loved your descriptions in this! You described the space in our hearts for a loved after they are gone, so well. Congrats on placing in the top 15!