The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/06
Interesting thoughts about a view from afar. Needs some editing here and there, but a sweet poem. Keep writing! God bless ya, littlelight
01/31/06
Interesting start, lots of good things going; has some issues with word combinations and pace. A little work and this one will be nice.
01/31/06
Very sweet, something fun to recite to children.
Oh, this is a simply delightful and charming poem! Yes, a poem perfect for children and one that can be enjoyed by adults as well! I like this very much!!