The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/06
Congratulations! I think the main conflict in your story is in the last few paragraphs, with the technology breakdowns--I wonder how it'd be different if you expanded that part, perhaps with humor, and reduced the earlier part about your writing process. Glad you got the thesis done despite your troubles!
01/27/06
Liked the grit it took to pick up the work again. Wonder how that would apply in other areas we have put aside because we're busy and tired?