The Official Writing Challenge
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What a unique way to approach this topic! I really appreciated this. You might want to correct the spelling of "Abel" if you re-publish this. I really like the way you got under Eve's skin...good job.
Good job! You identified pretty well the feelings Eve would be having in each of these three times of her life. Her grief over the loss of both sons was especially well done. I have nothing more to add to what Jan has already said.